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[Rhombus and Triangle]

Spelling Errors

First off there were spelling errors in this (rhombus and isoceles to name two).

Also it seemed pretty pointless and the humor was bland at its blandest.

James-R responds:

The spelling errors were made intentionally to be poetic.

[Escape Film Thing]

Excellent

I only have one question. Who was that getting ass-pounded by silver in the intro?

biblo responds:

iPod

[Snake in a box]

Could have been better. but could have been worse

I kind of liked the general idea, but it could have been more interesting. Maybe something like him hiding in the box in a room, then a bad guy picking it up and finding him inside. Graphically, it looks like there's pretty much a total lack of shading and the shapes for the soldiers in particular look unnatural (mainly because totally straight lines or totally smooth curves are rare in nature). However, from the looks of it, this wasn't a big enough thing to really warrant that much detail. I'm just trying to give feedback on what was good or bad.

Also, the gradient gunshot was way ugly. I'm guessing you just didn't have the time (or didn't feel like devoting the time for a complex muzzle flash. Really though, they're not particularly easy to do, so I guess it's excusable, but if I were you, I'd probably go with a flash of smoke instead.

Half decent.

Pete-the-poe responds:

This was slapped together in 2 hours, I wasn't aiming tpo high for this. But your criticism is what I want to hear from people. I know this was half-assed. But thanks, and be on the look out for a series were gonna start spiting out.

[Unforgotten Realms: Epi6]

GET YOUR FACTS STRAIGHT!11q

Barbarians are literate if they have 1 or more levels in a class that is not illiterate. Because sorcerors are literate, Mike having a level in Barbarian doesn't make him illiterate (though he would be if was just a level 1 Barbarian). That was clearly stated in the player's handbook. The movie itself was very funny, and, unfortunately, the people who have begun mocking you aren't, unlike when the Star Syndicate made fun of TooF. Too bad for them. Keep making them good. Oh yeah, in the next one, maybe you should have Mike somehow become a quasideiity. That could be pretty funny. Make a musical, you have a wonderful singing voice.

Sirschmoopy responds:

You don't think I know this? I did it on purpose so people who make this exact review and look like total nerds.

[666BloodyFuck]

Nice loop, better avatar

I liked the graphics and sound of the loop. I usually don't like loops, so that hurts my opinion towards this. I don't really think that this is that well fit for NG, being a tiny loop, but it isn't fit for turd of the week either. It is much better than that. However, being turd of the week gets it attention and a chance for people to see that it is good. I think this is better suited to be a forum avatar or part of a forum signature, however.

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it :D. I actually made it into an avatar for my myspace today. I don't mind the award, kinda like it in fact, only problem is some of these reviews are a real pain.

Anyways, thanks for the review sir